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Revision is necessary—especially transitions that reinforce a review of literature. For example, you tend to cite the source at the end of each paragraph, but you need to discuss the sources, which usually means naming them within the paragraph. Also, it appears that you mention one source per paragraph. Look at the methods for organizing an LR. Cluster sources of similar viewpoints together. The LR should not be just a list of the sources in paragraph form. So some restructuring and clearer transitions are necessary for your revision. See the sample review of literature in Writer’s Help.
• Your abstract is too long. It should also be one paragraph, not multiple paragraphs. It also needs to address the review of literature findings more clearly, not the argument per se.
• The text of this paper is just under 1800 words. Don’t forget the word requirement is 2200 for the body of your paper, this does not include the abstract.
• See my comments in References, but especially note my feedback on format in your AB.
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