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DATA ANALYSIS. NEEDS CORRECTIONS AS BELLOW?
1) He needs to have one of the approved APA editors review his dissertation (they have to be able to sign off on it)
~Why does he have Chapter Summaries?
2) He has wording/grammar issues?many of the words that he has used change the meaning.
3) He needs to revise his abstract, explain what he means by physiological suffering (he needs to define it)
4) Why does he not summarize the data in a table? Table 1 does not tell me ?themes?? I don?t see how all of his interviews lead to his summary. Can he present the data in a different way?
5) He wrote in one section that he was able to determine causation (error)
6) His slides are more descriptive?can he integrate some of that information into his dissertation?
7 He needs to discuss the implications of his research (interventions) and discuss what should happen next? What research is needed? He is too broad in his recommendations—he has the info. For example, long term effects of war. Can he spell out—-how it impacts the survivors as parents? How it effects their interpersonal relationships? In many ways, I cannot see how his data changed what he already knew. I don?t see how the data made a difference from what he told us at the proposal. What did the interviews add? What ?exploration? took place as a result of his study?
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