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i will upload the paper work with supervisor comments and this is:
General comments
Thank you for this assignment. You have selected an interesting topic which is clearly of value to your current practice. Your work shows promise, but you need to read around the subject area and enhance your analysis at level 7. There area few areas for development which you need to consider and the annotations made in your work and comments below should help you develop your analysis.
Your introduction needed to be supported with relevant evidence and theory. Whilst you highlight the complications of the cvc site, you needed to support this with literature that would enhance your analysis.
The literature review raised some pertinent points, however, this section was too descriptive. You need to enhance your analysis through relating your appraisal to relevant research theory. For example you mention a couple of times that randomisation was used, however you haven?t really explored the significance of this in relation to the rigor of the study you included.
You have selected an appropriate methodology, however this section is rather lengthy and doesn?t really relate to your clinical issue. You need to develop your analysis here.
You have selected an appropriate study design, but you need to strengthen your analysis, for example, you need to justify your sample, and provide more detail about your data collection too. An analysis of the variable involved would support this section. You need to discuss how you will analysis the data-what type of data will be obtained and how this will be managed. You need to provide much more detail about the ethical an how this will be managed.
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