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areas need a score of 3 to pass the paper. please see below for the areas need editing/revision.
1. grammar, punctuation, spelling (score 2): contains errors of word choice & multiple errors of sentence fluency which makes the writing difficult to understand. revision is suggested to improve the accuracy of the mechanics of writing.
2. Basis for practice (score 1): the source of the decision regarding hair removal in the particular facility is lacking in this paper. revision is suggested to include an explanation of who determined the basis for the practice in the facility.
3. Rationale (score 2): the rationale for hair removal is provided but this discussion lacks of details at the local level. revision is suggested to explain the rationale for the decision made regarding the practice in the facility.
4. Reference list (score 1): A list of the literature review sources is not found in the body of paper. revision is suggested to include a list in the paper that lists the sources used in the literature review according to the task criteria for sources and list them according to APA format.
5. Clinical implications (score 2): the clinical implications of ways to prepare patients prior to surgery are discussed including removing & cleansing of the skin but the statement “the shaving should be carried out in the operating room” disagrees with other parts of discussion and many of the sources cited are from textbooks older than 5 yrs (recommended for this task). revision is suggested to logically discuss the clinical implications for the practice from sources that meet the criteria of the task.
6. Stakeholders (score 2): a general discussion of those involved in the practice such as experts and patients are mentioned but this discussion is broad. revision is suggested to narrow the focus of the discussion to the stakeholders who can be involved in the decision making process or who will need to comply with the proposed change.
7. Translation of research (score 2): a general discussion of the need to change practice is provided but this discussion lacks of details regarding the interpretation of research. revision is suggested to discuss the difficulties of translating research into practice.
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